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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Letter for increment

please help me, if the below letter is correct

Dear Sirs,
I have been working in First Oil & Gas Company for almost a year and I’ m confident enough that I have rendered and contributed enough effort and services for the success of the company as your secretary. I have been sharing and spending my valued time and dedication not only being with my job but in all given tasks.
In connection with this, may I request to have my housing allowance to be a part of my basic salary and transportation expenses.
I therefore earnestly request your kind honor to please grant me an increment as much as appropriate.
I am looking for your favorable response.
Thank You.
  

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Dear Sirs, I have been working in First Oil & Gas Company for almost a year and I a m confident that I have contributed much effort and rendered valuable services for the success of the company as your loyal and dedicated secretary. I have been sharing and spending my valued time not only with my matters directly related to my job description but in all given tasks. In connection with this, I wish to request to have my housing allowance be a part of my basic salary and transportation expenses.

  • Dear Sirs, I have been working in First Oil & Gas Company for almost a year and I a m confident that I have contributed much effort and rendered valuable services for the success of the company as your loyal and dedicated secretary.
  • I have been sharing and spending my valued time not only with my matters directly related to my job description but in all given tasks.
  • In connection with this, I wish to request to have my housing allowance be a part of my basic salary and transportation expenses.
  • I therefore earnestly request your honor to kindly grant me an appropriate increment in my pay.
  • I am looking to your favorable response.
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Dear Sirs,
I have been working in First Oil & Gas Company for almost a year and I am confident that I have contributed much effort and rendered valuable services for the success of the company as your loyal and dedicated secretary. I have been sharing and spending my valued time not only with my matters directly related to my job description but in all given tasks.

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