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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter for family status

Hi,

' I would like to bring your kind attention that I never had family status in my agreement when I was bachelor. Now I wish to bring my family with me. So kindly requesting you to provide family status'

Above is the draft email to my manager. could you please provide some suggetions to make it better.
  

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Put the receiver's name and address at the top left. Put a complimentary closing at the bottom left. ').

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  • Put the receiver's name and address at the top left.
  • Put a complimentary closing at the bottom left.
  • ').
  • Then re-post your letter and we'll have a closer look at it.
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Put the receiver's name and address at the top left. Put a complimentary closing at the bottom left. Change 'Hi' to a proper greeting ('Dear....'). Then re-post your letter and we'll have a closer look at it.
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