Can somebody help me improve this letter? I am writing a letter to drop a minor course.
Dear _____,
I am writing this letter to request withdrawal from the course MGT 105.
From the first three weeks of our classes, I realized that the weight of this course is not something I can handle along with the major courses I am currently taking.
I have evaluated my ability to cope with stress and asked for my parents' opinion regarding this matter. With their advice and my careful consideration, I have thus decided to drop the course.
I understand that I will be three more units behind for doing so. Nevertheless, because of my past experiences and issues regarding
mental health among college students,
I have come up with the decision to prioritize my physical and mental health more.
I am hoping for your kind consideration.
Sincerely,
__________
' as it sounds more like what you're intending to say. Perhaps you could also slip in an apology within one sentence to make it clear that you are genuinely sorry to be stopping.
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It's mostly fine - I'd change the penultimate sentence to 'I have come TO the decision...' as it sounds more like what you're intending to say.
Perhaps you could also slip in an apology within one sentence to make it clear that you are genuinely sorry to be stopping.
Please help me to write a letter for dropping a subject minor and add the major subject. thank you!