Letter for applying second school

hello I draft the letter for my daughter and I do not know this is complete and correct English. please help

p.s: she wants to study in this school as an international student. where I should note this?

senders name

senders address

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email

Date:

principle name

Subject: application for 11^th grade

Dear XX

I am a parent who is seeking an open and lively learning environment for my daughter in order for her to experience balanced development in academic, moral, physical and artistic qualities, as well as have the value of love, goodness and truth nurtured in her researching secondary schools, I am greatly impressed by your school's educational philosophy, dedicated teaching staff, overall facilities and excellent track record. Therefore, I would like to apply on behalf of my daughter,XX, for admission into your school.

XX has graduated from 10^th grade .Through her studies, she gained a strong academic background while developing her moral values and sportive qualities as well Moreover, she earned high marks in different subjects including Mathematics, Geometry, Physics, English and Chemistry.

In addition to academic achievement, we have provided opportunities for XX to better develop her other abilities and talents. She has participated in various extra-curricular activities including Swimming, rowing and drawing classes. She is a member of Oil Company and province swimming team and has won many awards in swimming. Also she is well trained in Computer. She has participated in Mock IELTS Exam an year ago and got 6.5 but she has gained more knowledge since then and she will surly achieve a better mark next time.

Additionally XX is dedicated to serving others. She has been a member of Students Council in school and she has always participated in school`s charity works and sold things to raise money. These activities have helped her develop confidence, responsibility and interpersonal skills.

We sincerely hope that XX can be admitted to your school as an international student, where she will receive appropriate guidance and continue to develop and express her unique individuality.

Enclosed are the application form and the required documents. I look forward to your favourable reply.

Sincerely

XX