Letter for a PhD position (please help)

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00I am trying to write a motivation letter for a PhD position in user system interaction02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam, 02br
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00I am writing to apply for the PhD. position in User system interaction at University of 01i00_____. I apply for your PhD project for three reasons. The first is that the project of “___________” precisely matches my particular area of interest in _______02i00: how to support cooperation and improve user friendliness of IT. The second is the high reputation of your university for producing outstanding graduates and keeping pace with changes in the world of USI and IT. And the third is your close relationship with well known global companies, which ensures that theoretical expertise is supported by real experience. The combination of these factors makes your PhD project the natural choice for me. 02br
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00I will complete my Master’s Program of Computer Science in Aug 2005 from the **** university, the Netherlands. My objective is to become a faculty member at a leading university and investigate issues concerned with User system Interaction as it affects product and technological design. My over 4-year formal training in computer science and about 2-year work experience in several companies could allow me to make a useful contribution to your team. 02br
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00Now I am doing my final master project at ITSEF. This is a project of "Overview and risk analysis of electronic payment systems". We plan to describe how 3 types of electronic payment protocols work and measure them against security requirements of the user. It could help improve the quality of security quantitatively and make electronic payment systems more user friendly without neglecting security issues. Before that my previous work experience as helpdesk and webdesigner allowed me to get a mcuh clearer idea of users' needs. 02br
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00The enclosed resume includes all the details related to my qualifications. 02br
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00I look forward to an opportunity of discussing my qualifications in detail. Hope to hear from you. Thank you very much 02br
00Sincerely Yours02br
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00I look forward to hearing your comments0-