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Kanou Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter correction
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding your programm for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours.
I wanted to apply for a position in this company because I have only heart good things about you. You have a large team of well known experts, from whom hope that I can learn a lot. Besides, the compañy works with the newest technology which I would like to know more about. I’m also well informed about your investigations, especially about those that are related to medicine. I think that it would be an honor to help you out with the researches thatconcern this field.
I think I would be of great value to the company. On one hand, I speak three languages perfectly well: Spanish, German and Swedish. I’m also studying to improve my English and i hope to get the C1 level soon. On the other hand, I’m studying medicine and I’m involved in several researches about heart diseases and cancer. As you can read I’m a studious and hard-working person that is eager to learn every day more an more. In addition, since I colaborated with different projects I’m a good team worker that knows not only how to organise myself ut also others.
I very much hope you will consider my application for this company because I would be really enthusiastic about working in such an enterprise like yours. I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Gloria
P.S: This letter was a writing task, so it is almost entirely fictional
I am writing to you regarding your programm for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours.
I wanted to apply for a position in this company because I have only heart good things about you. You have a large team of well known experts, from whom hope that I can learn a lot. Besides, the compañy works with the newest technology which I would like to know more about. I’m also well informed about your investigations, especially about those that are related to medicine. I think that it would be an honor to help you out with the researches thatconcern this field.
I think I would be of great value to the company. On one hand, I speak three languages perfectly well: Spanish, German and Swedish. I’m also studying to improve my English and i hope to get the C1 level soon. On the other hand, I’m studying medicine and I’m involved in several researches about heart diseases and cancer. As you can read I’m a studious and hard-working person that is eager to learn every day more an more. In addition, since I colaborated with different projects I’m a good team worker that knows not only how to organise myself ut also others.
I very much hope you will consider my application for this company because I would be really enthusiastic about working in such an enterprise like yours. I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Gloria
P.S: This letter was a writing task, so it is almost entirely fictional
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your program for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours. I wanted wish to apply for a position with XYZ in this because of the renowned reputation of your company I have only heart good things about you . You have a large team of well known experts, from whom I hope that I can learn a lot.
- Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your program for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours.
- I wanted wish to apply for a position with XYZ in this because of the renowned reputation of your company I have only heart good things about you .
- You have a large team of well known experts, from whom I hope that I can learn a lot.
- Besides, the compa n y works with the newest technology which I wish to become more familiar with would like to know more about .
- I’m also well informed about your research investigations , especially about those that which is are related to medicine.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding your program for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours.
Iwanted wish to apply for a position with XYZ in this because of the renowned reputation of your company I have only heart good things about you. You have a large
I am writing to you regarding your program for university students, to gain work experience in an international company like yours.
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Thank you for your time, you always help me =)
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Thank you for your time, you always help me =)
This time I have some questions :
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Word warrior23What position are you applying for?Oh! This is just an exercise to practise one of the tasks of the Cambridge Advanced Exam. This means that the letter is fictitious. I made almost everything up.
And since it is a work experience program I suppose I wouldn't be able to choose? Like they would give me whatever they think would be the bes
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Kanou This one went quite wrong.It's not a matter of it going wrong. If I were you, I would see this as an opportunity to improve!
Kanou Is it better to use "wish"“Wish” is more polite than “want”, and the past simple is incorrect here.tonot to sound too arrogant?
“Would like to know mo
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Thank you so much for motivating me! I think I've understood everything and I will try to avoid this mistakes! I also think that letters are one of my weakest points
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KanouThank you so much for motivating me! I think I've understood everything and I will try to avoid suchI think you're doing fine with your letter writing. Keep going!thismistakes! I also think that letters are one of my weakest points.
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