Letter correction

I had a really hard time writing this letter because I wasn't inspired at all by the topic. I have the feeling that it 's really bad. But since in the CAE you can't choose among too many tasks I have to force myself to try and write about everything...

I know that maybe the structure isn´t that good either, so maybe some tips related to making links between ideas would be great!

Thanks in advance!

Dear Editor,

I am writing in regard to the article published last moday about the local arts day. I helped to organise that “disappointing” event and I completly differ from the reporters’ opinion about that day.

First of all we should take into consideration that our town is quite small and that makes it difficult to find a proper venue with good access and enough parkings. Besides it’s our first year organising an event and it isn’t well known yet. I’m positive about the fact that this will change and more people will come every year.

Aside from this it wasn’t supposed to be a big event with a huge amount of visitors. We were happy enough to see the familiar faces of our neighbourhood and feel the warm atmosphere. There was a workshop for children where they could try out different ways to be creative, the parents loved the idea and took the chance to see our artists who were happy about showing their crafts. At the end of the day we had a concert and a lot of young people showed up.

I am sure that the majority of our visitors had a great time. I am sorry for the reporter who couldn’t understand the goal of our event. We want people to enjoy our events, the number of visitors isn’t that important to us.

Yours sincerely

Gloria

P.S: You can also correct my comments if they have any mistakes =)