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Brown80 Posted 14 years ago
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Letter Correction
Hi there,
Kindly correct this letter, I hope time permits you.
Manager,
Insurence company.
Dear Sir,
I would like to inform you that I took insurence last year. And on 12th march, 2012, Things and most of the properties was stolen. That time my wife had got coma stage. During the police inquiry, My daughter and me said to the police we lost only Rs 2 00000. After my wife getting normal, we knew that everything was stolen. Therefore my wife inform this matter to your company via letter as soon as possible and we didnt do our business until you saw my shop. finally, police continued the inquiry according to my duaghter and me. They didnt consider my wife's statements. At the same time, we didnt extend the inquiry because My wife is in bad condition(sick). Therefore I inform u that our all statements are true.
Thank you.
Kindly correct this letter, I hope time permits you.
Manager,
Insurence company.
Dear Sir,
I would like to inform you that I took insurence last year. And on 12th march, 2012, Things and most of the properties was stolen. That time my wife had got coma stage. During the police inquiry, My daughter and me said to the police we lost only Rs 2 00000. After my wife getting normal, we knew that everything was stolen. Therefore my wife inform this matter to your company via letter as soon as possible and we didnt do our business until you saw my shop. finally, police continued the inquiry according to my duaghter and me. They didnt consider my wife's statements. At the same time, we didnt extend the inquiry because My wife is in bad condition(sick). Therefore I inform u that our all statements are true.
Thank you.
Top answer
Hi; I have no idea what you are saying here. Are you asking the company for compensation? Are you contesting the police report?
- Hi; I have no idea what you are saying here.
- Are you asking the company for compensation?
- Are you contesting the police report?
- Are you giving additional information as a follow-up to prior correspondence?
- In business letters, you need to be very clear - eg.
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Hi;
I have no idea what you are saying here. Are you asking the company for compensation? Are you contesting the police report? Are you giving additional information as a follow-up to prior correspondence? In business letters, you need to be very clear - eg.
Dear Sir,
I have an insurance policy number YE3489K399 with your company which I purchased last year.
I am making a cla
I have no idea what you are saying here. Are you asking the company for compensation? Are you contesting the police report? Are you giving additional information as a follow-up to prior correspondence? In business letters, you need to be very clear - eg.
Dear Sir,
I have an insurance policy number YE3489K399 with your company which I purchased last year.
I am making a cla
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