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Dear sir, ?????? ?????

I wish to bring your kind attention to my concerns regarding job. Few days I am trying to talk to you but you are very busy in the office, so I can’t able to talk you.

I am a person with 6 year experience in the design filed and worked in the top most designing firm in India. Before coming here I had a Salary of Rs. 24,000 (excluding other benefits aprx. QAR 2200). I am married person & we lived together only for 4 months. I am responsible person to feed seven members of my family.

I got accommodation in the phase II building and there is no Kitchen, A/c and sometime no water. I already informed this matter to manager. This is the fourth month I have been here. Now I am getting only Qr. 1500/- as salary. I can’t go further with this salary. If you are not satisfied with my performance I am ready to go back.

So Please give me proper advice on the above matters and I have every hope that you will take necessary action.

Thanks and Regards