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Josepinto Posted 18 years ago
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Dear all,
First of all, I'd like to thank for this great help for us all. I've been using this forum to clarify my doubts and, so far, so good!
So, once again, I'm asking you help to correct my english.
As a result of my exchange period at AHO, , I found a great country to start my professional life at a fulltime basis. During this period I had investigate many design companies and I realized that <company> is one of the finest companies to start my career.
I identify myself with your company profile. I advocate your philosophy and methodology. Actually, those are the main reasons why I have decided to apply for a position.
I finished my bachelor’s degree in “Design de Equipamento” [product design] at ESAD [Escola Superior de Arte e Design], Matosinhos, , in July 2005. Since then I keep a part-time activity as designer. As I am a Nordic Design lover, in September 2006, I started the Master of Arts, Industrial Design, at the Faculty of Art and Design, of , .
Currently, I am writing the thesis which theme is related with Creativity using Design Methodology as a starting point. I am a keen believer in team work, especially multidisciplinary teams, once I believe that the project efficiency and quality results increase considerably by this means.
I send you my CV and portfolio to better evaluate my abilities. Related to loota project, there is a video which you can watch at <link>. Please, do not hesitate to contact for further information. I would really appreciate an opportunity at your company.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
First of all, I'd like to thank for this great help for us all. I've been using this forum to clarify my doubts and, so far, so good!
So, once again, I'm asking you help to correct my english.
As a result of my exchange period at AHO, , I found a great country to start my professional life at a fulltime basis. During this period I had investigate many design companies and I realized that <company> is one of the finest companies to start my career.
I identify myself with your company profile. I advocate your philosophy and methodology. Actually, those are the main reasons why I have decided to apply for a position.
I finished my bachelor’s degree in “Design de Equipamento” [product design] at ESAD [Escola Superior de Arte e Design], Matosinhos, , in July 2005. Since then I keep a part-time activity as designer. As I am a Nordic Design lover, in September 2006, I started the Master of Arts, Industrial Design, at the Faculty of Art and Design, of , .
Currently, I am writing the thesis which theme is related with Creativity using Design Methodology as a starting point. I am a keen believer in team work, especially multidisciplinary teams, once I believe that the project efficiency and quality results increase considerably by this means.
I send you my CV and portfolio to better evaluate my abilities. Related to loota project, there is a video which you can watch at <link>. Please, do not hesitate to contact for further information. I would really appreciate an opportunity at your company.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Top answer
During my exchange period at AHO, Oslo, I found Norway an exciting country in which to work . I investigated many design companies and realized that <company> would be a fine place to start my career. I am applying for a position with you because I identify myself with your company profile and advocate your philosophy and methodology.
- During my exchange period at AHO, Oslo, I found Norway an exciting country in which to work .
- I investigated many design companies and realized that <company> would be a fine place to start my career.
- I am applying for a position with you because I identify myself with your company profile and advocate your philosophy and methodology.
- I received my bachelor’s degree in Design de Equipamento (Product Design) at ESAD ( Escola Superior de Arte e Design ) , Matosinhos, Portugal, in July 2005.
- Since then , I have been a part-time designer.
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During my exchange period at AHO, Oslo, I found Norway an exciting country in which to work. I investigated many design companies and realized that <company> would be a fine place to start my career. I am applying for a position with you because I identify myself with your company profile and advocate your philosophy and methodology.
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