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Ben9108 Posted 21 years ago
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we would like to report that a new secondary filter has been replaced and fixed properly. In this case, the routine inspection and filter cleansing will be reinforced for the improper operation of the
system in order to alleviate the unexpected damage.
On the other hand, please be informed that all primary filter or removable parts of the system do not be dismantled without notice.

Please help me to check and amend my letter.
  

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We would like to report that the secondary filter has been replaced and the equipment fixed properly. In this case, routine inspection and filter cleaning will be augmented because of the improper operation of the system, in order to alleviate any unexpected damage. Please be informed that no primary filters or removable parts of the system should be dismantled without authorization .

— Mister Micawber

  • We would like to report that the secondary filter has been replaced and the equipment fixed properly.
  • In this case, routine inspection and filter cleaning will be augmented because of the improper operation of the system, in order to alleviate any unexpected damage.
  • Please be informed that no primary filters or removable parts of the system should be dismantled without authorization .
  • To be honest, you have filled this memo with so much verbiage that I am not sure I have interpreted the situation correctly.
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We would like to report that the secondary filter has been replaced and the equipment fixed properly. In this case, routine inspection and filter cleaning will be augmented because of the improper operation of the system, in order to alleviate any unexpected damage. Please be informed that no primary filters or removable parts of the system should be dismantled without authorization
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