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Vincent tee Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter check for Grammar & Re-structuring Sentences

0 Hi English Guru, I am pretty poor in English. Could someone please help to refine the letter below? (grammar mistakes and restructuring of sentences) Many Thanks!!02br
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01font00Hi Desmond,02br
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01font001)00 00I have reiterated many times to talk to you about my position and my technical expertise for MI. Please be clarified that I am not a web developer for this project and MI does not require one. I am a BW Consultant specializes in front end web reporting. Below is the BW Diagram I have downloaded from 00 AG. I am specializing in the web reporting area highlighted by the blue box.02font02br
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01font002)00 00Our MI reporting codes have to be maintained from time to time and need expertise to debug the backend codes. Web reporting is a big area for MI because all our MI Web Reports are displayed via Internet Browser. Therefore a technical expert has to maintain and debug the codes due to report changes, maintenance & etc. (that is why I have to attend to most of Wendy’s and Chee Wei’s request which are unforeseen to the team because of report coding bugs) All the report codes was written by me from scratch.02font02br
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01font003)00 00If I would focus and accelerate on BW support, I would suggest the management to hire another BW Consultant specializes in Web Reporting & Front End to take over my current position, hiring a normal web developer will not able to handle the job unless given specific training on 00, BW Front End and BW Programming. For instance, Syamraj has been assigned to BSP programming, he could not do the tasks even he is a BW Consultant and not to say a Web Developer who dosen’t know 00.02font02br
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01font004)00 00It is not a wise to always compare Reena and I as she has 0 knowledge in BW whereas I was one of the pioneers to built BW MI Web Reporting from scratch with 2 years of experience in BW Reporting and 5 years inweb & successfully completed 2 major BW Projects for BAT as well (00& Project 00). I can say I am technically very strong. I would suggest the management should hire a BW consultant for Web Reporting to replace my current position if I were to concentrate and excel in support role. 02font02br
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01font005)00 00It is not an issue to multitask but not recommended to multitask in different broad area like BW Web Reporting and BW Support. If that’s the case, surely I’ll be a little backwards for support. It is absolutely fine to be doing multitask for minor roles like coordinating training, documenting support procedures, preparing a practical training plan, knowledge transfer, slides preparation & presentation, managing documents and etc02font02br
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01font006)00 00Last but not lease, from my investigation my charge out rate as a BW Consultant specializes in Web Reporting is really not on par according to industry standard, therefore it suppose to say my current workload has to be justified according to my current charges.02font02br
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1font 00Hi Desmond,02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Here are some points to emphasize for your understanding: 02font 02br 02br 01font 001)00 00I have reiterated many times about my position and my technical expertise for MI. Please be informed that I am not a web developer for this project and that MI does not require one. I am a BW Consultant specializing in front end web reporting.

  • 1font 00Hi Desmond,02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Here are some points to emphasize for your understanding: 02font 02br 02br 01font 001)00 00I have reiterated many times about my position and my technical expertise for MI.
  • Please be informed that I am not a web developer for this project and that MI does not require one.
  • I am a BW Consultant specializing in front end web reporting.
  • Below is the BW Diagram I have downloaded from SAP AG.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 02font 02br 02br 01font 002)00 00Web reporting is a big area for MI because all our MI Web Reports are displayed via Internet Browser.
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