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Ziomek645 Posted 8 years ago
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to make a complaint regarding flight XYZ. My ticket reference number for this flight is XYZ.

This flight was supposed to depart from Rzeszow on 02.11.2018 at 14:30 and arrive at Sri Lanka at 20:00, but connecting flight to Amsterdam was delayed by almost 3 hours, then canceled.

I am writing to express my disappointment with poor customer service. I wasn't informed about the delay and causes of it until I got into the airport and to make matter worse, the flight was later canceled.

I would like to ask for the full refund of $200, which I have paid for this ticket. I have attached the receipt and tickets to the letter. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you regarding this letter within the week.

Yours faithfully
XYZ

  

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2018 at 14:30 and arrive at Sri Lanka at 20:00, but the connecting flight to Amsterdam was delayed by almost 3 hours, then canceled. I am writing to express my disappointment with your poor customer service. I wasn't informed about the delay or the causes of it until I got into the airport, and to make matters worse, the flight was later canceled.

  • 2018 at 14:30 and arrive at Sri Lanka at 20:00, but the connecting flight to Amsterdam was delayed by almost 3 hours, then canceled.
  • I am writing to express my disappointment with your poor customer service.
  • I wasn't informed about the delay or the causes of it until I got into the airport, and to make matters worse, the flight was later canceled.
  • I am asking for a full refund of $200, which I paid for the ticket in question .
  • I have attached the receipt and tickets to the letter.
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This flight was supposed to depart from Rzeszow on 02.11.2018 at 14:30 and arrive at Sri Lanka at 20:00, but the connecting flight to Amsterdam was delayed by almost 3 hours, then canceled.

I am writing to express my disappointment with your poor customer service. I wasn't informed about the delay or the causes of it until I got into the airport, and to make

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