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0Hello.. could someone please check my letter? Thnx allot!!02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,00Hereby I like to introduce myself to you. I am a second year student of the Higher Professional Education at 00 (Bachelor level), Department Build Environment. 00 00After summer Holliday I have to do an internship within a period from September 2008 till February 2009. 00About the internship I have a question. I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in 010200, 00. After a long search I have found your company on the internet. 00My question is if it is possible to do this internship at your company. I would like to do this together with another student of my class. I am approaching your company because I am very interested in your projects at the moment and what I have seen in the portfolio at your site. 00Because we have chosen specialization building management we would like to work in the building management, in the work preparation and/or project managing. 02br
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00Would you be able to help us further with our internship?00 00Yours faithfully, 02br
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00Nick Strating 00The other student: Clint van Zanten02br
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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madam,02br 02br 01del 00Hereby I like to introduce myself to you. 02del 00I am a second year student 01u 00of02u 00 the Higher Professional Education 01u 00at02u 00 00Amsterdam00 (Bachelor level), 01u 00Department Build Environment02u 00 [01i 00This phrase does not make sense to me02i 00]. 00 I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in 00Australia00, 00Perth00.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madam,02br 02br 01del 00Hereby I like to introduce myself to you.
  • 02del 00I am a second year student 01u 00of02u 00 the Higher Professional Education 01u 00at02u 00 00Amsterdam00 (Bachelor level), 01u 00Department Build Environment02u 00 [01i 00This phrase does not make sense to me02i 00].
  • 00 I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in 00Australia00, 00Perth00.
  • After a long 01u 00search I 02u 00have found your company on the internet.
  • 00My question 01u 00is if it is02u 00 possible to do this internship at your company.
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00I am a second year student 00at the Higher Professional Education 00of 00 (Bachelor level), 00institute Built Environment00. After 00summer00 00holiday00s I 00will have an internship in the period from September 2008 00
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00I am a second year student 00at the Higher Professional Education 00of 01span00Amsterdam02span01span00 (Bachelor leve
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Dear Sirs,
Good Day

Please check my recommendation letters and thanks for your teaching.

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I am very pleased to write recommendation letter for Mr Kyaw Thu Htun who joined Elite Tech Development Co.,Ltd in September, 2012. He graduated with Bachelor Degree in Port and Harbor Engineering from Myanmar Maritime University and served as an Assistant Engineer in Port De
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M/s K.S. Trading (Pvt) Ltd has quote for the above tender and also they have mentioned in their tender document that have completed the

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could someone please check my letter?

As a skilled human resources professional with experience in a wide range of HR functions, I am pleased to present the enclosed resume. You will find my dedication and enthusiastic attitude to be of value to your company as your next HR Generalist.

My expertise lies in successfully coordinating organizational planning and development th

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I'm sorry for the way I acted Sunday night, I know that it was uncalled for and wrong. I was being selfish just because I just wanted to sit upstairs eat an watch T.V and I know it was a lot of stress on you because you've been cooking and running around all day and I should've helped you and I should've put more effort in to help in whatever way that I could have that night and I truly apolo

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this is my first attempt at writing a motivation letter so please help me & check my letter. i would be very grateful if u could show the things that need correction. its a bit urgent.so help!!


Dear Sir or Madam:


With this letter, I would like to express my interest in applying for a Master of Science in Finance starting in autumn 2019. I strongly believe that my educatio

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