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Ilovetako Posted 22 years ago
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Letter - Applying for an internship
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I have been in the States for 3 years and looking for a Web Development Internship. I found this opening very interesting and I really want to get this intership. However, I am not sure the following paragraph (an email to hiring manager) makes sense or not. I want her to know that I have been checking back her website from time to time and really happy to see the opening. Please check it for me for any grammatical mistake and usage of English. Thank you very much for your help....
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I have been waiting for this Web Development Internship opening for a long time, finally I have a chance to present myself to you. I graduated form *** with a B.S. degree in Information System on May 2003 and started working as a full time programmer (Visual FoxPro) at *** (Health Research Organization). I have been working at *** for 1 year and 3 months, I realized that I love programming, but I love web developing more. Therefore, I decided to attend the Web Development Certification Program at *** which will be ended in Oct 2004. I will earn my designation as a Certified Professional Web Developer. I have a passion for web developing and want to focus on this field in the future. I believe that my qualifications, such as computer skills, enthusiasm and detail-oriented personality will be beneficial to ***. I am also eager to learn new information and I am also a quick leaner. If given the opportunity, I will put my wholehearted efforts to work on all my responsibilities. Finally, I would like to thank you for your favorable consideration of my application. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further. My cover letter and resume are attached to this email for your review. Thank you for your time.
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Kate
I have been in the States for 3 years and looking for a Web Development Internship. I found this opening very interesting and I really want to get this intership. However, I am not sure the following paragraph (an email to hiring manager) makes sense or not. I want her to know that I have been checking back her website from time to time and really happy to see the opening. Please check it for me for any grammatical mistake and usage of English. Thank you very much for your help....
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I have been waiting for this Web Development Internship opening for a long time, finally I have a chance to present myself to you. I graduated form *** with a B.S. degree in Information System on May 2003 and started working as a full time programmer (Visual FoxPro) at *** (Health Research Organization). I have been working at *** for 1 year and 3 months, I realized that I love programming, but I love web developing more. Therefore, I decided to attend the Web Development Certification Program at *** which will be ended in Oct 2004. I will earn my designation as a Certified Professional Web Developer. I have a passion for web developing and want to focus on this field in the future. I believe that my qualifications, such as computer skills, enthusiasm and detail-oriented personality will be beneficial to ***. I am also eager to learn new information and I am also a quick leaner. If given the opportunity, I will put my wholehearted efforts to work on all my responsibilities. Finally, I would like to thank you for your favorable consideration of my application. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further. My cover letter and resume are attached to this email for your review. Thank you for your time.
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Kate
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Hi Kate, Just to make the organization easier, I am going to ask that we continue your thread in the letters secton where you have also posted this same message. See you in the letters section. Letter - Applying for an internship I will be replying shortly.
- Hi Kate, Just to make the organization easier, I am going to ask that we continue your thread in the letters secton where you have also posted this same message.
- See you in the letters section.
- Letter - Applying for an internship I will be replying shortly.
- MountainHiker
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Hi Kate,
Just to make the organization easier, I am going to ask that we continue your thread in the letters secton where you have also posted this same message.
See you in the letters section. Letter - Applying for an internship
I will be replying shor
Just to make the organization easier, I am going to ask that we continue your thread in the letters secton where you have also posted this same message.
See you in the letters section. Letter - Applying for an internship
I will be replying shor
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