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Layla1234 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Letter and note

Can you have a look at these two letters and correct any mistakes?


A short note;

Yesterday in the corridor's university I lost important notes. These are the notes I need for tomorrow's exam.
Please help me find them or it?
If you have any information, please contact me under the phone number:07181932930. A robust reward awaits for the happy finder.


An informal letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about an MP player that I bought from your website on 15 March. The MP3 player you sent me does not work, it is useless and it keeps crashing. It was an extremely unfortunate event/situation because it was a gift for my close friend to celebrate her 18th birthday.
I was very dissapointed when it turned out that the MP3 player was damaged. I would like to receive a full refund of my money. Could you exchange it for a new one?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ

Thanks in advance

layla
  

Top answer

Yesterday at the university's corridor, I lost important notes. These are the notes I need for tomorrow's exam. Please help me find them If you have any information, please contact me on the phone number:07181932930.

  • Yesterday at the university's corridor, I lost important notes.
  • These are the notes I need for tomorrow's exam.
  • Please help me find them If you have any information, please contact me on the phone number:07181932930.
  • A great reward waits for the happy finder.
  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about an MP3 player that I bought from your website on 15 March.
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Yesterday at the university's corridor, I lost important notes. These are the notes I need for tomorrow's exam.
Please help me find them
If you have any information, please contact me on the phone number:07181932930. A great reward waits for the happy finder.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about an MP3 player that I bought from your website on 15 March. The M

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