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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
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Please point out the mistakes in this letter.
Sir
We would like to bring to your notice that we are facing serious financial problems when there is a delay in our salary. Our salaries for the month of June 2015 got credited in our bank accounts only on the 7th of July.
We need to pay for a lot essential expenses related to our household during the first few days of the months. Therefore, we find it very difficult when there is a delay in our salaries.
In addition,when we fail to remit the loan repayments within the deadline set by the bank, which is usually the 5th of every month,we have to a pay a considerable sum as a penalty for it.
Please consider our situation.
Thank you for understanding,
Yours sincerely,
Please point out the mistakes in this letter.
Sir
We would like to bring to your notice that we are facing serious financial problems when there is a delay in our salary. Our salaries for the month of June 2015 got credited in our bank accounts only on the 7th of July.
We need to pay for a lot essential expenses related to our household during the first few days of the months. Therefore, we find it very difficult when there is a delay in our salaries.
In addition,when we fail to remit the loan repayments within the deadline set by the bank, which is usually the 5th of every month,we have to a pay a considerable sum as a penalty for it.
Please consider our situation.
Thank you for understanding,
Yours sincerely,
Top answer
The biggest problem is that it does not request anything specific. eg Please ensure that our salaries are deposited into our bank accounts by the end of the last business day of the month. You don't need to mention your personal banking situation such as loan repayments.
- The biggest problem is that it does not request anything specific.
- eg Please ensure that our salaries are deposited into our bank accounts by the end of the last business day of the month.
- You don't need to mention your personal banking situation such as loan repayments.
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The biggest problem is that it does not request anything specific. eg Please ensure that our salaries are deposited into our bank accounts by the end of the last business day of the month.
You don't need to mention your personal banking situation such as loan repayments.
You don't need to mention your personal banking situation such as loan repayments.
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AlpheccaStarsThe biggest problem is that it does not request anything specific. eg Please ensure that our salaries are deposited into our bank accounts by the end of the last business day of the month.I understand. Thank you,AlpheccaStars.
AlpheccaStarsYou don't need to mention your personal banking situation such as loan repayments.
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Sir
We, the members of the customer sales team, would like to bring to your attention that deposits of our salaries into our bank accounts have been late. For example, our salaries for the month of June 2015 got credited in our bank accounts only on the 7th of July.
This causes us difficulties in paying our obligations on time, and incurs unnecessary late fees and pena
We, the members of the customer sales team, would like to bring to your attention that deposits of our salaries into our bank accounts have been late. For example, our salaries for the month of June 2015 got credited in our bank accounts only on the 7th of July.
This causes us difficulties in paying our obligations on time, and incurs unnecessary late fees and pena
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