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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Letter

Hi

Please help me with the mistakes in this letter.

Dear Sir

I appeared for the interview for the position of a lecturer in your institution on.....

I was selected for the position and given the appointment letter on ......... Then, I surrendered my academic certificates in your office.

Due to some unforeseen developments in my family I was not able to join your institution.

I express my sincere apologies for the inconvenience it might have caused.

Please send my certificates to the address given below by Speed Post.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours sincerely
  

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Dear Si r, I appeared for the was interview ed for the position of l ecturer in your institution on..... I was selected for the position and given the appointment letter on ......... Then, I surrendered Afterwards, I submitted my academic certificates in to your office.

— Teechr

  • Dear Si r, I appeared for the was interview ed for the position of l ecturer in your institution on.....
  • I was selected for the position and given the appointment letter on .........
  • Then, I surrendered Afterwards, I submitted my academic certificates in to your office.
  • However, d ue to some family unforeseen development s, in my family I was am not able to join your institution.
  • I express my sincere apologies for the inconvenience it this might have caused.
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Dear Sir,

I appeared for the was interviewed for the position of lecturer in your institution on.....

I was selected for the position and given the appointment letter on ......... Then, I surrendered Afterwards, I submitted my academic certificates in to your office.

However, due to some
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Thank you very much,teechr.
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Hi teechr
I have question about 'submit' here.

In some places in our country the employers demand for the certificates of the selected candidates to keep them under his custody until they leave the organisation. This they do to prevent the employee from leaving the company on his own accord or at a time he is not expected to do so.

The I think surrender fits better.
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vsureshIn some places in parts of our country, the employers demand to keep for the certificates of the selected candidates to keep them under his their custody
That's all the more reason to use "submit"; you don't want to concede to them that you surrendered your certificates!
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I got it . Thank you, teechr.
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