Letter

I was signed in earlier and lost my post with someone that was helping me. I also cannot remeber his name to contact him back. Sorry.

Would someone be able to help put my thoughts together. This is part of a letter for my 18 year-old who is graduating. It will be posted in his yearbook.

You have grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with limitless compassion, kindness and respect for others. Through your caring nature, you have met many wonderful people. Your hard work and dedication have brought you many opportunities and achievements and will continue to do so throughout your journey in life. You always strive to do your best. You have much to be proud of.

You have grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with limitless compassion, kindness and respect for others. Your caring nature has brought many wonderful people into your life. Your hard work and dedication have brought you many opportunities and achievements and will continue to do so throughout your journey in life. You always strive to do your best. You have much to be proud of.

Which bolded sentence sounds better and should I add something after wonderful people in the first paragraph as well as after life in the second paragraph? It doesn't sound completed to me.

Thank you