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Ishee23 Posted 16 years ago
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"Pleased be advised that due to Ramadan timings we had to postpone the training and we are re- arranging computer training program in coordination with the MIS department for the following courses in the month of November for the hospital administrative and non administrative staff." Is this Correct if I write this??
  

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Hello, ishee-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out unnecessary verbiage: Pleased be advised that due to Ramadan timings we had to postpone the training and we are re- arranging computer training program in coordination with the MIS department for the following courses in the month of November for the hospital administrative and non - administrative staff. Is this Correct if I write this?

  • Hello, ishee-- and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out unnecessary verbiage: Pleased be advised that due to Ramadan timings we had to postpone the training and we are re- arranging computer training program in coordination with the MIS department for the following courses in the month of November for the hospital administrative and non - administrative staff.
  • Is this Correct if I write this?
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Hello, ishee-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out unnecessary verbiage:

Pleased be advised that due to Ramadan timings we had to postpone the training and we are re- arranging computer training program in coordination with the MIS department for the following courses in the month of

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