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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hi all,

Can somebody please give some comments on the sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi

1- My master study with the new research team is progressing very well.

2- At the moment, I am writing papers for two studies which were completed in November, 2007 and January 2008.

3-In addition to that, I have started writing chapters for my thesis.

4- Fortunately, Dr John Gilbert from , the world expert on the P is on his sabbatical leave in my research centre until end of the year. He has agreed to help me with my master work by providing comments and guidance. This surely will increase the quality of my master work.
  

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Hi Fizzi, 1 - My master study with the new research team is progressing very well. My studies for my master's work with the new research team are progressing very well. Better is My graduate work with the new research team is progressing very well.

— Clive

  • Hi Fizzi, 1 - My master study with the new research team is progressing very well.
  • My studies for my master's work with the new research team are progressing very well.
  • Better is My graduate work with the new research team is progressing very well.
  • 2- At the moment, I am writing papers for two studies which were completed in November, 2007 and January 2008.
  • One might argue that the studies are not completed if you are writing papers about them.
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Hi Fizzi,

1- My master study with the new research team is progressing very well.

My studies for my master's work with the new research team are progressing very well.

Better is My graduate work with the new research team is progressing very well.

2- At the moment, I am writing papers for two studies w
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Dear Clive,

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. You have helped me a lot.

Regards,

Fizzi
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