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Fizzi Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Would somebody please help me with my English?
Hi Sue,
How are you? I am Dean, a PhD candidate under the supervision of G and B from the Q research center. For your information, I am planning to do a study on the quality of information provided by sales representatives to physicians. Most probably, the study would be a comparative study between Australia and New Zealand and it may take place in the middle of next year.
I have came to know from G and B that you are planning to do similar study in Canada. I was wondering if there is an opportunity for us working together in that research.
Regards,
Dean
Hi Sue,
How are you? I am Dean, a PhD candidate under the supervision of G and B from the Q research center. For your information, I am planning to do a study on the quality of information provided by sales representatives to physicians. Most probably, the study would be a comparative study between Australia and New Zealand and it may take place in the middle of next year.
I have came to know from G and B that you are planning to do similar study in Canada. I was wondering if there is an opportunity for us working together in that research.
Regards,
Dean
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It should be a little more formal, I think-- you don't know Sue personally, I presume-- and this is a formal offer of collaboration. Dear Ms ____ , My name is Dean _____ , a PhD candidate under the supervision of Drs. G and B from the Q R esearch C enter.
- It should be a little more formal, I think-- you don't know Sue personally, I presume-- and this is a formal offer of collaboration.
- Dear Ms ____ , My name is Dean _____ , a PhD candidate under the supervision of Drs.
- G and B from the Q R esearch C enter.
- I am planning to do a study on the quality of information provided by sales representatives to physicians.
- Most probably, the study will be a comparative one between Australia and New Zealand , and it may take place in the middle of next year.
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It should be a little more formal, I think-- you don't know Sue personally, I presume-- and this is a formal offer of collaboration.
Dear Ms ____ ,
My name is Dean _____ , a PhD candidate under the supervision of Drs. G and B from the Q Research Center. I am planning to do a study on the quality of information provided by
Dear Ms ____ ,
My name is Dean _____ , a PhD candidate under the supervision of Drs. G and B from the Q Research Center. I am planning to do a study on the quality of information provided by
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