Let my hair down
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1. During summer, there is a two-month vacation. After going to school and studying all the time for more than three months, I’m glad I can do whatever I want without any pressure at that time. (Originally written by a junior student.)
2. In summer, there is a two-month vacation. After strenuously studying at school for more than three months, I can do whatever I want to do without any pressure. During the vacation, I would like to stop being so stressful and let my hair down for once.
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1. During the summer, there is we have a two-month vacation. After going to school and studying all the time for more than three months, I’m glad I can do whatever I want without any pressure at that time .
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- During the summer, there is we have a two-month vacation.
- After going to school and studying all the time for more than three months, I’m glad I can do whatever I want without any pressure at that time .
- 2.
- In the summer, there is we have a two-month vacation.
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1. During the summer, there is we have a two-month vacation. After going to school and studying all the time for more than three months, I’m glad I can do whatever I want without any pressure at that time.
2. In the summer, there is we have a two-month vacation. After strenuously studying at school for more than three months,
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