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Loler Posted 15 years ago

Let me write a poor poem.

Hi everyone,I am a English learner.But My English is poor.So,you should tell my all of my errors.(Maybe this sentence has)

Now,let me give a short poem.

Poem of First Day in EnglishForward

Go,I should learn English.

Don't stop,we should learn English.

You'll get it if you find it.

Energy,equipment and egg.They just are under you.

Go,I will learn English.

Don't stop,we will learn English.

Well,it's far from us.

Alright,we just go on foot.

Everything won't stop.

Ok,let's mobile~

---loler 10.15.2011

By the way,I have a question.

In many English army movies,I always hear the soldiers say "let's mobile".

But "mobile" is a n. Why use it like this?Or my hearing is poor?
  

Top answer

Hi everyone, I am a English learner. But My English is poor. So,you should tell my all of my errors.

  • Hi everyone, I am a English learner.
  • But My English is poor.
  • So,you should tell my all of my errors.
  • (Maybe this sentence has some.
  • ) Now,let me give a short poem.
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Hi everyone,

I am a English learner. But My English is poor. So,you should tell my all of my errors.

(Maybe this sentence has some.)

Now,let me give a short poem.

Poem of First Day in EnglishForward
Go,I should learn English. (It is correct, but the subject of "go" is "you". It is a little strange to have two different subjects in one line of poetr

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