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Last night you called back home saying that you still hadn’t received the money that Mom wired to the Bank of China. We could feel that you were burning with anxiety, and we were also nervous with worry. We don’t know what key link goes wrong. Luckily, this morning you were unwilling to give up and went for a Hail Mary at the bank which is still open on Saturday morning. After you mentioned what you had come for, the bank clerk immediately offered to lend you help. He examined your account and verified that the next day the remittance from Taiwan had been transferred into your account. However, the sum of money was wired in USD, not RMB, so when you insert your cash card into the ATM of Bank of China, it won’t show the remittance. You have to withdraw the amount of money in USD from the bank first, and then change it to RMB and deposit it in your account of the bank. So that you may use your cash card to withdraw the money you want at the ATM of Bank of China. It turns out that we don’t know how the transferred account procedure of the banks in China works. We are glad to know your problem is solved and we also learn from this experience. Good luck with you in your future itinerary in China.