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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Lead kids to

Please check the following paragraph.

Next, she is a nice teacher with patience, enthusiasm and love. If I didn’t fully understand what she taught, she would teach me more times until I got the point. Besides, she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped kids expose to nature.
  

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I have underlined problems: Next, she is a nice teacher with patience, enthusiasm and love. If I didn’t fully understand what she taught, she would teach me more times until I got the point. Besides , she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped kids expose to nature.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined problems: Next, she is a nice teacher with patience, enthusiasm and love.
  • If I didn’t fully understand what she taught, she would teach me more times until I got the point.
  • Besides , she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped kids expose to nature.
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I have underlined problems:

Next, she is a nice teacher with patience, enthusiasm and love. If I didn’t fully understand what she taught, she would teach me more times until I got the point. Besides, she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped kids expose to nature.
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Next, she is a nice teacher with patience, enthusiasm and love. If I didn’t fully understand what she taught, she would teach me again and again until I got the point. In addition, she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped children to be exposed to nature.
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she even led kids to join summer/winter camp which helped expose them to nature.
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