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Beopro Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Layers

1. Whenever I wrap gifts, I always wrap lots of layers so that people who open gifts have a feeling of suspense when opening them.

- Does this sentence sound grammatical and ok to say?

Thank you very much, Teachers

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It's too repetitive. ' Rover

  • It's too repetitive.
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It's too repetitive.

'Whenever I wrap gifts I always use lots of layers to increase the suspense for those who open them.'

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beopro1. Whenever I wrap gifts, I always wrap lots of layers so that people who open gifts have a feeling of suspense when opening them.- Does this sentence sound grammatical and ok to say?
It is grammatically OK, and it's OK to say.
You could use fewer words to say the same thing, but that is a choice of the speaker.
Your long sentence adds to the lis

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