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Abil Posted 18 years ago
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launched another deadly attack
1. Barely five days after an attack on the village of A, the terrorists last night launched another deadly attack on the village of B in C area killing a 66-year old villager.
2. One villager was killed in a fresh terrorist attack in A (name of the village) last night. The attack comes barely five days after a similar attack on C village in
the area.
Which one do you think best? Any other mistakes? Thanks.
2. One villager was killed in a fresh terrorist attack in A (name of the village) last night. The attack comes barely five days after a similar attack on C village in
the area.
Which one do you think best? Any other mistakes? Thanks.
Top answer
I prefer #2. There is no need to cram all the information into one sentence.
- I prefer #2.
- There is no need to cram all the information into one sentence.
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I prefer #2. There is no need to cram all the information into one sentence.
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