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ReDSanchous Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

last time + a few more grammar questions

Hey everyone!

I have a few questions to ask.

1. Major Western oil companies were moving away from the CIS (Commonwealth of Independent States) because the risks involved: unfriendly tax regimes, uncertain political climate and financial problems.

As you can see, there are four underlined phrases/words in the sentence. There is one error in the sentence. Try to find it. The error should be among the underlined words/phrases.

2. a) The last time I saw him was Monday. b) The last time I saw him was on Monday

Which sentence sounds the most natural to you?

3. My Dad told me that he doesn't want to buy a new expensive car because he doesn't want to make an impression that he has a lot of money on his partners.

Is the structure in italics correct?

Thank you a million times for your answer!
  

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ReDSanchous Hey everyone! I have a few questions to ask. 1.

  • ReDSanchous Hey everyone!
  • I have a few questions to ask.
  • 1.
  • Major Western oil companies were moving away from the CIS (Commonwealth of Independent States) because the risks involved: unfriendly tax regimes, uncertain political climate and financial problems.
  • As you can see, there are four underlined phrases/words in the sentence.
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ReDSanchousHey everyone!

I have a few questions to ask.

1. Major Western oil companies were moving away from the CIS (Commonwealth of Independent States) because the risks involved: unfriendly tax regimes, uncertain political climate and financial problems.

As you can see, there are four underlined phrases/words in th
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Thanks!

Why is it wrong to say: because the risks involved....?
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The verb "involve" is always used as a transitive verb. So "the risks involved" cannot be a clausal sentence. It is a noun phrase, i.e., "the risks (which were) involved".

As for your third sentence, "make an impression that …" looks fine to me, though I might extrapose that-clause rightwards, i.e., "he doesn't want to make an impression on his partners that he has a lot of money".
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I'm afraid that I don't understand what you mean by 'So "the risks involved" cannot be a clausal sentence. It is a noun phrase, i.e., "the risks (which were) involved".'
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Idiom: give someone to believe that ...
    To make someone think that or to give the impression that
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ReDSanchousIt is a noun phrase, i.e., "the risks (which were) involved".' Emotion: embarrassedWhat should I cha
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In #1, I would say that "...because of the risks involved..." is the natural amendment. But the sentence teeters on the brink of possibility, as it stands; this version brings out one meaning, perhaps:

1. Major Western oil companies were moving away from the CIS (Commonwealth of Independent States) because the risks of staying there involved unfriendly tax regimes, an uncertain political
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Hey MrP!

I don't think that what you changed in #1 differs much from the original sentence. You just added the gerund form. Does -ing play an important part in that sentence?
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Hello RdS

You're right – it was only a small change, to bring out a possible sense. "Risks" seemed to require qualification, in the absence of context. But "staying there" was only one of many possibilities!

MrP

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