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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Last sentence needs help
My wife is developing her "About Us" page on her Consignment Sale website.
This last sentence needs polishing.
"We value our consignors and hope to improve our relationships with them each year. We believe good consignors and volunteers is what makes our sale great."
Any suggestions?
This last sentence needs polishing.
"We value our consignors and hope to improve our relationships with them each year. We believe good consignors and volunteers is what makes our sale great."
Any suggestions?
Top answer
"We value our consignors and strive to continuously improve our relationships with them. "
- "We value our consignors and strive to continuously improve our relationships with them.
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"We value our consignors and strive to continuously improve our relationships with them. We believe our wonderful good consignors and volunteers are what makes for our sale great sales to satisfied customers."
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