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Speedoz Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Laptop request

Is it enough to write the following email to my direct manager to change my laptop:

Dear ... ,

This is a kind request to change my laptop as my current one is very slow.

Regards,
  

Top answer

You are using 'kind' wrongly: the word should be applied to the other person, not to yourself—but the request is yours! Dear ... , Would it be possible to change my laptop ?

— Mister Micawber

  • You are using 'kind' wrongly: the word should be applied to the other person, not to yourself—but the request is yours!
  • Dear ...
  • , Would it be possible to change my laptop ?
  • My current one is very slow.
  • Thank you very much,
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You are using 'kind' wrongly: the word should be applied to the other person, not to yourself—but the request is yours!

Dear ... ,

Would it be possible to change my laptop? My current one is very slow.

Thank you very much,
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