", somewhat disconnected from the flow of ideas. Also, " the money" works better at position (5). At (2) it would more likely be just "money".
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GPYFor one thing, inserting the new sentence at (2) leaves the last sentence, "Material wealth in and of itself ...", somewhat disconnected from the flow of ideas.That I understand.
GPYAlso, "the money" works better at position (5). At (2) it would more likely be just "money".Even though 'mon
AnonymousI mean, does "money" have to be also mentioned in the sentence right before (2) so that 'the money' could work at (2)?It is not essential. I just thought it was another possible factor favouring (5)
AnonymousAlso, all things considered, do you believe that (5) should be the only possible answer?It seem
No 5 is the best answer because the other sentences all explain about why one would desire it. The 'even so' part expresses that although all the other reasons are about acquisition of money for itself, answer number 5 describes using the money in all the other sentences for the gaining of experiences.