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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Knowing that...
I want to write a cover letter, and I would like to add something like "knowing that XYZ is a growth oriented company..." but something sounds wrong to me...
Can anybody give some ideas about possible alternatives?
" Understanding that.." sounds better to me, but still I am not sure..
Can anybody give some ideas about possible alternatives?
" Understanding that.." sounds better to me, but still I am not sure..
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It's better if you show us a complete sentence. I suggest that you consider instead 'Because XYZ is . '.
- It's better if you show us a complete sentence.
- I suggest that you consider instead 'Because XYZ is .
- '.
- It's a stronger phrase.
- Clive
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It's better if you show us a complete sentence.
I suggest that you consider instead 'Because XYZ is . . .'. It's a stronger phrase.
Clive
I suggest that you consider instead 'Because XYZ is . . .'. It's a stronger phrase.
Clive
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Thank you Clive
As a conclusion, I want to start my last paragraph with a sentence like:
"Knowing that XYZ is a growth oriented company, I can reassure you my full awareness about the responsibilities regarding this job offer."
The word "Knowing" doesnt sound good to me...I dont say that its wrong (?) but I was thinking to use something else. "Understanding" is an option that I thou
As a conclusion, I want to start my last paragraph with a sentence like:
"Knowing that XYZ is a growth oriented company, I can reassure you my full awareness about the responsibilities regarding this job offer."
The word "Knowing" doesnt sound good to me...I dont say that its wrong (?) but I was thinking to use something else. "Understanding" is an option that I thou
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With full knowledge that XYZ is a growth-oriented company, I can reassure you my full awareness about the responsibilities regarding this job offer.
Although the connection between growth-oriented and job responsibilities escapes me.
The sentence is not very logical.
Although the connection between growth-oriented and job responsibilities escapes me.
The sentence is not very logical.
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Is this a letter in which you accept a job that has been offered to you?
If so, is it a senior, managerial type of position?
Clive
If so, is it a senior, managerial type of position?
Clive
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Its a motivation letter to apply for a job offer
@AlpheccaStars, I like your suggestion "with full knowledge..."
"Although the connection between growth-oriented and job responsibilities escapes me."
what do you mean by that?
Thanks
Michael
@AlpheccaStars, I like your suggestion "with full knowledge..."
"Although the connection between growth-oriented and job responsibilities escapes me."
what do you mean by that?
Thanks
Michael
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Anonymous"Although the connection between growth-oriented and job responsibilities escapes me."what do you mean by that?I cannot see any logic in the sentence.
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"Knowing that XYZ is a growth oriented company, I can reassure you my full awareness about the responsibilities regarding this job offer."
i see several problems with this sentence.
eg You are talking about a job or a position with the company. Until they offer you a job, there is no 'job offer'.
i see several problems with this sentence.
eg You are talking about a job or a position with the company. Until they offer you a job, there is no 'job offer'.
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Thanks guys for your replies and sorry for taking me so long to answer
What I mostly want to express with this sentence, is that I understand the responsibilities regarding this job position, especially since XYZ tries to growth and has high demands from their personnel
I was thinking something like :
"With full knowledge that XYZ is a growth-oriented company, I can assure you my f
What I mostly want to express with this sentence, is that I understand the responsibilities regarding this job position, especially since XYZ tries to growth and has high demands from their personnel
I was thinking something like :
"With full knowledge that XYZ is a growth-oriented company, I can assure you my f
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AnonymousI was thinking something like :"With full knowledge that XYZ is a growth-oriented company, I can assure you my full awareness about your demands regarding this job position."As we have commented, it is not an acceptable sentence in the context of a person seeking a job.
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