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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Kinldy check my paragraph on Sub prime crisis

The saddest joke for the America is that it was searching Weapons of Mass Destruction in , but it was in there own backyard – sub prime mortgages and other derivatives. Big giants like Lehman brothers, Merrill Lynch tumbled like a pack of cards overnight. Till now WMD has engulfed hundreds of thousands of jobs and it is spewing venom – recession all over the globe. All countries are bombarding it with stimulus packages, bailout plans but unable to contain it.
  

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e. e. America's) own backyard – sub - prime mortgages and other derivatives.

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  • America's) own backyard – sub - prime mortgages and other derivatives.
  • ) of cards overnight.
  • (actually, Merrill Lynch was purchased, and is still very much in operation) Until now WMD has (I would make the verb plural, since you have defined the subject as plural above.
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CreativeguruThe saddest joke for the on America is that she it (prefer to use she/her, rather than it/its) was searching Weapons of Mass Destruction in Iraq, but it wasthey (i.e. the weapons) were in her (i.e. America's) own backyard – sub-prime mortgages and other derivatives
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Thanks a lot for you kind help and detailed explanation

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