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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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00A lifetime of moments where even the wind and the sun, the stars and the sky, are humbly awaiting your command. 00The Royal treatment and luxurious living awaits your family at Morte Carlo. 00 00Picture perfect, an enchanting fairy tale ready and waiting to be experienced and cherished for a lifetime.02br
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1i 00Ecstasy you can't escape00 02i 02br 02br 00This doesn't sound like something I'd want. 02br 02br 01i 00A lifetime of moments where even the wind and the sun, the stars and the sky, are 01del 00humbly02del 00 awaiting your command. 02i 02br 02br 00This "awaiting your command" stuff doesn't work for me.

  • 1i 00Ecstasy you can't escape00 02i 02br 02br 00This doesn't sound like something I'd want.
  • 02br 02br 01i 00A lifetime of moments where even the wind and the sun, the stars and the sky, are 01del 00humbly02del 00 awaiting your command.
  • 02i 02br 02br 00This "awaiting your command" stuff doesn't work for me.
  • 02br 02br 01i 01del 00The02del 00 Royal treatment and luxurious living 01del 00awaits02del 00 01b 00await02b 00 your family at Morte Carlo.
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1i00Ecstasy you can't escape00 02i02br
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00This doesn't sound like something I'd want. "You can't escape" is usually used for things you 01i00do 02i00want to escape from.02br
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01i00A lifetime of moments where even the wind and the sun, the stars and the sky, are 01del00humbly02del
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