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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Kindly tell which sentence is right

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00Today, a billion Indians are dreaming big. And we’re here to make sure every one of those dreams comes true02br
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00I tried to write in different ways as follows but maintaining the essence of the sentence kindly tell me if these sentences are right]02br
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00a. Today, a billion Indians are dreaming big. We’re here to make sure it comes true02br
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00b. Today, a billion Indians are dreaming big. We’re here to transform it into reality 02br
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00c. Today, a billion Indians are dreaming big. And we’re here to make sure everyone’s dream comes true0-
  

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0 Hi Creativeguru02br 00I don't like the use of the word 'it' in sentences (a) and (b). 02br 00Sentence (c) is better, but "everyone" doesn't necessarily refer only to Indians. In the context, people will 01u 00probably02u 00 understand 'everyone' as a reference to Indians, however.

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  • 0 Hi Creativeguru02br 00I don't like the use of the word 'it' in sentences (a) and (b).
  • 02br 00Sentence (c) is better, but "everyone" doesn't necessarily refer only to Indians.
  • In the context, people will 01u 00probably02u 00 understand 'everyone' as a reference to Indians, however.
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0 Hi Creativeguru02br
00I don't like the use of the word 'it' in sentences (a) and (b). 02br
00Sentence (c) is better, but "everyone" doesn't necessarily refer only to Indians. In the context, people will 01u00probably02u00 understand 'everyone' as a reference to Indians, however. 0-
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0 ok instead of it how is the folowing sentence00 02br
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00Today, a billion Indians are dreaming big. We’re here to make sure their dreams comes true0-
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