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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Kindly suggest correct sentence
Is the following sentence makes sense, I just want to communicate that pearl jewellery
is excellent to wear and perfect for gifting.
Freshwater Pearl jewellery is simply exquisite to wear and make excellent luxurious gift
is excellent to wear and perfect for gifting.
Freshwater Pearl jewellery is simply exquisite to wear and make excellent luxurious gift
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It reads awkwardly to me. I would rewrite it: Exquisite "Freshwater Pearl" jewellery, perfect for wearing, makes an excellent gift. OR "a gift of luxury".
- It reads awkwardly to me.
- I would rewrite it: Exquisite "Freshwater Pearl" jewellery, perfect for wearing, makes an excellent gift.
- OR "a gift of luxury".
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It reads awkwardly to me. I would rewrite it:
Exquisite "Freshwater Pearl" jewellery, perfect for wearing, makes an excellent gift. OR "a gift of luxury".
Exquisite "Freshwater Pearl" jewellery, perfect for wearing, makes an excellent gift. OR "a gift of luxury".
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