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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like.

Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

Parents always want their children to remain happy and healthy. It is argued that many parents fulfil each and every wish of their children and do whatever their children want. I think it is a welcome development, and it can lead to many positive results.

When parents fulfil every desire of their children, they in turn become obedient. That is to say that once children see that their wishes are fulfilled, in return they follow each and every instruction of their father and mother. They become polite and their behavior is improved significantly. If parents do not provide children what they ask for, they may become disobedient and adopt a rude behavior. In a movie, for example, The Courtesy, the actor provided all the things to his two daughters what they demanded. Thus, they remained cheerful and obedient to his father.

If parents provide all the demanded things to children, valuing relationships and increase in bonding are the two important consequences for children when they grow up. This means, children will start to value family relations when they see that their demands are being fulfilled. Also, their relationship with parents will get stronger since they will be realizing that they are getting utmost care in terms of fulfilled wishes. According to a survey, for instance, numerous teenagers of Delhi, the capital of India, speak rudely to their elder family members and do not respect cultural values. This is because their demands were ignored by their parents when they were children.

In conclusion, providing each and everything to children affects positively on them because they become obedient and courteous and give respect to family values.