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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Kindly requesting help for correcting grammar and making these sentences flow
It was written by an Artist to add to her profile page where she will show her paintings. I copy/pasted it here without any changes. I think its a great, but maybe just needs a few tweaks to make it flow better, and for possible grammar changes, but I don't know how to. Kindly requesting help in this, thank you!
One day, a friend asked if I can envisage a world without colours... any colour. A difficult task, bordering foolishness. But I like to do foolish things. So I picked up all colours and splashed them on a canvas and made humble effort to make the world colourful.
One day, a friend asked if I can envisage a world without colours... any colour. A difficult task, bordering foolishness. But I like to do foolish things. So I picked up all colours and splashed them on a canvas and made humble effort to make the world colourful.
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I am only taking care of grammar, nothing else. One day, a friend asked if I can could envisage a world without colours... any colour.
- I am only taking care of grammar, nothing else.
- One day, a friend asked if I can could envisage a world without colours...
- any colour.
- A difficult task, bordering on foolishness.
- But I like to do foolish things.
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I am only taking care of grammar, nothing else.
One day, a friend asked if Ican could envisage a world without colours... any colour. A difficult task, bordering on foolishness. But I like to do foolish things. So I picked up all the colours and splashed them on a can
One day, a friend asked if I
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