Kindly rephrase below paragraph as Im not sure with it. Thank you
A precise and detail-oriented individual having 11 strong years in Procurement / Buyer career with specialization in Purchasing, Contracts Administration, Global & Strategic Sourcing, Inventory and Vendor Management in Equipment, Machine & Spare Parts, Computer Hardware & Software, Electrical, Electronics and Communications. I exceed goals with an effective and proactive management style with strong communication skill and taking initiatives and decisions in a strategic manner to accomplish growth and better opportunities.
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The first part is not a sentence. It is too long. The capitalization is erratic.
- The first part is not a sentence.
- It is too long.
- The capitalization is erratic.
- The second is too much jargon strung together.
- Write simple and straightforward sentences.
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The first part is not a sentence. It is too long. The capitalization is erratic. The second is too much jargon strung together. Write simple and straightforward sentences.
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