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Pure and elegant, pearls have long been the symbol of purity & class. symbolizes wisdom, love, success and happiness. It is an aura of pure delight.

Popley presents ‘Mottomo’, pearls for every occasion. Freshwater jewellery make an excellent birthday gift, and are a memorable thing for anniversary gifts.. Pearl jewellery’s gifts, are welcome in any season of the year.

Answer the following few questions and you stand a chance to win exclusive Mottomo from Popley

Q. 1 Pearls is found in which type of water?
a) Fresh water. b) Salt water. c) Brackish water

Q. 2 Pearls is extracted from?
a) Clam b) shell c) oyster

Q. 3 Which is pearl jewellery brand from the stable of Popley?
a) Amore b) Emotions c)Mottomo

To participate in the contest, simply tick the correct answers and just drop it at any of the popley outlet mentioned overleaf and you could be the lucky winner.

Doll · Accepted Answer

My try:

Creativeguru Popley presents ‘Mottomo’ pearls for every occasion. Freshwater Pearl jewellery (is this a brand name?) makes an excellent birthday gift and ~~are~~ a memorable thing for anniversary gifts. Pearl jewellery’s gifts are welcome in any season of the year.
Answer the following few questions and you stand a chance to win exclusive Mottomo from Popley.
Q. 1 In which type of water are pearls found ~~Pearls is found in which type of water~~?
a) Fresh water. b) Salt water. c) Brackish water
Q. 2 What are pearls is extracted from?
a) Clam b) shell c) oyster
Q. 3 Which is pearl jewellery brand is from the stable of Popley?
a) Amore b) Emotions c)Mottomo
To participate in the contest, simply tick the correct answers and just drop them at any of the Popley outlet mentioned overleaf and ~~you could~~ be the lucky winner.

Feebs11 · Answer

Creativeguru Popley presents ‘Mottomo’, pearls for every occasion.

Pure and elegant, pearls have long been the symbol of purity and class. The pearl symbolizes wisdom, love, success and happiness. It has an aura of pure delight.

Freshwater Pearl jewellery makes excellent and memorable birthday and anniversary gifts, welcome in any season of the year.

Answer the following questions and you stand a chance of winning an exclusive piece of Mottomo jewellery from Popley.

Q. 1 Pearls are found in which type of water?
a) Fresh water. b) Salt water. c) Brackish water

Q. 2 Pearls are extracted from?
a) Clam b) shell c) oyster

Q. 3 Which pearl jewellery brand is from the stable of Popley?
a) Amore b) Emotions c)Mottomo

To participate in the contest, simply tick the correct answers and just drop this card at any of the Popley outlets mentioned overleaf and you could be the lucky winner.

In your text you have "Freshwater pearls", but oysters only grow in salt water.

BarbaraPA · Answer

And just a side note, but how can you say that b is incorrect as an answer to Q2? Don't oysters have shells?

Doll · Answer

<img src="http://www.EnglishForward.com/emoticons/emotion-4.gif"/>Come on ladies! Of course they don't want to give the pearls! They just did this ambiguity on purpose.

Creativeguru · Answer

ya dear indeed you are absolutely right it's a intentional ambiguity

BarbaraPA · Answer

"Intentional ambiguity" is not good business.

You will anger people. It creates ill-will toward your business. Is that really the strategy you want to employ?

Creativeguru · Answer

No dear we need the people should get answers right the probability of getting the answer right is more as there are three options and out of three, two are right. thats the strategy dear

Feebs11 · Answer

How many winners do you expect?
What happens if all the answers you get are correct?
How do you decide who is a winner?

Creativeguru · Answer

It's not that sir, at the end of the day it will be lucky draw & it's a loyalty programme we are targeting to our loyal customer base that's it

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