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0 What does Vikings do? Do they really exist here on earth? For avid readers, Vikings were the warriors who fought for the sake of their lives to establish, and success would come to their tribes, and for the victory. This may something to do with their plans about some important relations regarding around the world. 02 br
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00 By the way, Vikings were not as brutal as others think were. They are nice; in addition, Vikings were similar to us who lives here on earth naturally. However, they are not as if that anytime because the patience and rules of the Vikings are not always relate to our times. In other words, their times were unsoiled to us. 02 br
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00 Vikings were able to fight around the world. They were as pierced as the other warriors were. Fortunately, Vikings became an outstanding sailor due to their advantage which is also known as their “armors and equipments”, despite the tactics and strategies they have used. 02 br
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00 By the way, Vikings were not as brutal as others think were. They are nice; in addition, Vikings were similar to us who lives here on earth naturally. However, they are not as if that anytime because the patience and rules of the Vikings are not always relate to our times. In other words, their times were unsoiled to us. 02 br
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00 Vikings were able to fight around the world. They were as pierced as the other warriors were. Fortunately, Vikings became an outstanding sailor due to their advantage which is also known as their “armors and equipments”, despite the tactics and strategies they have used. 02 br
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0 You need to work on your verb tenses. Vikings existed in the past so you can't use present tense verbs such as do, exist, are. Some of your word choices are incorrect; soiled, pierced.
- 0 You need to work on your verb tenses.
- Vikings existed in the past so you can't use present tense verbs such as do, exist, are.
- Some of your word choices are incorrect; soiled, pierced.
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0 You need to work on your verb tenses. Vikings existed in the past so you can't use present tense verbs such as do, exist, are. Some of your word choices are incorrect; soiled, pierced. 0-
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0 Dear nona! 02 br
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00 I'm Chaw Su. I've already summit my writing but nobody check it. I really need this. Could you please correct my writing if you have time? 02 br
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00 I will be thanking you if you help me. 02 br
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00 Good luck 02 br
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00 chaw su 0-
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00 I'm Chaw Su. I've already summit my writing but nobody check it. I really need this. Could you please correct my writing if you have time? 02 br
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00 I will be thanking you if you help me. 02 br
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00 Good luck 02 br
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00 chaw su 0-
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