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Speedoz Posted 15 years ago
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Kindly need your help

Hello,

Would you please review the email below before I send it. I feel that it’s full of mistakes.

Dear … ,

Hope this email finds you well.

We will get back to you with our final decision regarding the price quotation you sent earlier.

We have additional request, we need to be provided with an analysis for everything will be published about youth in the top 2 newspapers in the gulf countries. Kindly provide you price quotation for 1 year (November 2011 to October 2012).

We appreciate your prompt response.

Sincerely,

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Dear … , I hope this email finds you well. We will get back to you with our final decision regarding the price quotation you sent earlier. We have one additional request : we would like an analysis of everything that will be published about youth in the top two newspapers in the Gulf countries.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear … , I hope this email finds you well.
  • We will get back to you with our final decision regarding the price quotation you sent earlier.
  • We have one additional request : we would like an analysis of everything that will be published about youth in the top two newspapers in the Gulf countries.
  • Kindly provide your price quotation for one year (November 2011 to October 2012).
  • We appreciate your prompt response.
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Dear … ,

I hope this email finds you well. We will get back to you with our final decision regarding the price quotation you sent earlier.

We have one additional request: we would like an analysis of everything that will be published about youth in the top two newspapers in the Gulf countries. Kindly provide your pri
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