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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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As per our telephonic conversation you can visit our Sparkle Tower Site at Dubai Marina Tomorrow 14 May 2015 in office hours , and you can directly meet with KEO Company Project Manager and inform them that you are visiting site on client request , kindly find the enclosed attachment of location for further information you can call any time.
  

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As we discussed in our telephone conversation [give time], you may visit our Sparkle Tower site at the Dubai Marina tomorrow, 14 May 2015, during office hours [give time range]. Please inform the KEO Company Project Manager there that you are visiting the site at the client's request. I have enclosed a map of the location.

— Deadrat

  • As we discussed in our telephone conversation [give time], you may visit our Sparkle Tower site at the Dubai Marina tomorrow, 14 May 2015, during office hours [give time range].
  • Please inform the KEO Company Project Manager there that you are visiting the site at the client's request.
  • I have enclosed a map of the location.
  • Please call at any time should you need further assistance.
  • "
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As we discussed in our telephone conversation [give time], you may visit our Sparkle Tower site at the Dubai Marina tomorrow, 14 May 2015, during office hours [give time range]. Please inform the KEO Company Project Manager there that you are visiting the site at the client's request. I have enclosed a map of the location. Please call at any time should you need further assistance.

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Anonymoustelephonic
This is odd and unnatural. Just use the word telephone.
Anonymousat Dubai Marina Tomorrow 14 May 2015 in office hours
at Dubai Marina tomorrow (a small letter t, here) 14th of May 2015 during office hours
Anonymous, and you can directly meet with
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