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Anjali 07 Posted 6 years ago
As requested sharing with you, the Experience Certificate attached herewith.Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards
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Kindly let me know if the sentence is correct or if can be corrected in better way ?
Dear XYZ,
As requested sharing with you, the Experience Certificate attached herewith.Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards
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Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards That is very obtuse and obscure writing. It uses complicated, somewhat antiquated and old-fashioned vocabulary that does not serve for clear communications.
- Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office.
- Thanks & Regards That is very obtuse and obscure writing.
- It uses complicated, somewhat antiquated and old-fashioned vocabulary that does not serve for clear communications.
- You may think that you are being sophisticated, but the effect is the opposite.
- It sounds bombastic.
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Anjali 07As requested sharing with you, the Experience Certificate attached herewith.Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards
That is very obtuse and obscure writing. It uses complicated, somewhat antiquated and old-fashioned vocabulary that does not serve for clear communications. You may think that you are being
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