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0Be ready now you will be a centre of attraction and the force of distraction at all social gatherings or at board meetings or simply put wherever you will go when you are dressed up with Balmain watches.02br02br00Is the above line grammatically correct?02br02br00Is there any better word than 'centre' to fit the above context?02br02br00Do you find this line appealing and alluring customer specifically men? 0-

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01b00Get02b00 ready 01b00to be the02b00 centre of 01b00attraction at02b00 all social gatherings01b00, at 02b00board meetings01b00 or wherever you go02b00 when you 01b00are wearing a 02b00Balmain01b00 watch.02b02br
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00Is the above line grammatically correct? --01b00 No. I have fixed it, though. You talk to much in your advertising; it needs to be brief and pointed.02b02br
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00Is there any better word than 'centre' to fit the above context? --01b00 No; that is a good one.02b02br
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00Do you find this line appealing and alluring customer specifically men? --01b00 No, I don't. I am not influenced by advertising generally.02b0-

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0Thanks a lot sir hope the day will come soon when you will reply your sentence is perfect grammatically! I am really working hard on that but still commit lots of mistake. Thanks for all your help through which I am learning a lot. This forum is really great. Hope one day I will pay back to this forum by sharing all the knowledge I gain from here to help others.0-

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