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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Kindly help me to crrect my sentences.

I have lost my wife recently due to lung cancer and she left me with 2 small kids age of 4 years. In order to survive my life I brought my parents on visit visa who are looking after my kids. My working schedule is from 8 am to 6 pm so I can’t parent them during day time. I can’t quit my job as there is no other financial support with me.

As their visit visa expire next month and no one is there look after them, I respectfully request you to approve their application of Family Resident Visa.
  

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I have lost my wife recently due to lung cance r. and S he left me with 2 small kids, 4 years of ag e. of 4 years.

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  • I have lost my wife recently due to lung cance r.
  • and S he left me with 2 small kids, 4 years of ag e.
  • of 4 years.
  • In order to surviv e, my life I brought my parents on a visit visa who are to loo k ing after my kids.
  • My working schedule is from 8 am to 6 p m, so I can’t parent them during the da y.
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I have lost my wife recently due to lung cancer. and She left me with 2 small kids, 4 years of age. of 4 years. In order to survive, my life I brought my parents on a visit visa who are to look ing after my kids. My working schedule is from 8 am to 6 pm, so I
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Thank you for your kind help. Shall I write as follows.
With reference to the above-mentioned subject, I have enclosed the application for resident visa to the my parents for your kind approval.

I lost my wife recently to lung cancer. She left me with 2 small kids, 4 years of age. In order to survive, I brought my parents on a visit visa to look after my kids. As my working schedule i
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With reference to the above-mentioned subject ? What is the subject?), I have enclosed two (? Are there two people? Can one visa be used for two different people?) applications for resident visas to the for my parents for your kind approval.

The reason I am requesting your approval is that I lost my wife
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