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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Kindly help me to correct these sentences

Due to sudden death of Mr. X's intimate relative, he compelled to leave on [date] immediately. As an emergency, he purchased a new ticket and travelled on [date]. So, he cancelled the purchased ticket which booked on [date] for his vacation.

Our office has paid only $ xx for his travel allowance, which was less than the original fare available in the market, so I request you to arrange for the shortfall in his travel allowance.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: Due to sudden death of Mr. X's intimate relative, he compelled to leave on [date] immediately . As an emergency, he purchased a new ticket and travelled on [date].

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Due to sudden death of Mr.
  • X's intimate relative, he compelled to leave on [date] immediately .
  • As an emergency, he purchased a new ticket and travelled on [date].
  • So, he cancelled the purchased ticket which booked on [date] for his vacation.
  • Our office has paid only $ xx for his travel allowance, which was less than the original fare available in the market , so I request you to arrange for the shortfall in his travel allowance.
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I have underlined some problem areas:


Due to sudden death of Mr. X's intimate relative, he compelled to leave on [date] immediately. As an emergency, he purchased a new ticket and travelled on [date]. So, he cancelled the purchased ticket which booked on [date] for his vacation.

Our office has paid onl
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I tried to corret the errors in the sentences, but I still have some cofusions in the sentences. Could you please look into it ?



Due to immediate death in the family of Mr. X', he need to leave for his home town immediately. So, he purchased a ticket and travelled on [date]. Therefore, he cancelled the ticket purchased previosly for his vacation which coo
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Due to a sudden death in the family of Mr. X, he needs to leave for his home town immediately, so he purchased a ticket and travelled on [date]. Therefore, he cancelled the ticket purchased previosly for his vacation, which commenced on [date].

Our office has paid him only $ *** for his travel allowance, which was less than the original f

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