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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Kindly help me to correct my sentences
First of all, it was not a drastic or nasty foul but it was just a movement from the frustration and not even it harm him. But attacking by physically is not acceptable which we can't entertain or accept. Also, this guy is so arrogant and he woukd have been removed from our squad earlier.
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Try this: Firstly, it was neither a drastic nor nasty foul, but a movement born of frustration; it didn't even harm him. However, physical attacks are not acceptable; we can neither entertain nor accept them. The third sentence needs me to know exactly what you mean - it isn't great English and I'm unsure as to exactly what you are trying to say.
- Try this: Firstly, it was neither a drastic nor nasty foul, but a movement born of frustration; it didn't even harm him.
- However, physical attacks are not acceptable; we can neither entertain nor accept them.
- The third sentence needs me to know exactly what you mean - it isn't great English and I'm unsure as to exactly what you are trying to say.
- Is this player so arrogant that he does not deserve a place in your squad NOW, or was he so arrogant that he has already BEEN removed from the squad?
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Try this:
Firstly, it was neither a drastic nor nasty foul, but a movement born of frustration; it didn't even harm him.
However, physical attacks are not acceptable; we can neither entertain nor accept them.
The third sentence needs me to know exactly what you mean - it isn't great English and I'm unsure as to exactly what you are trying to say. Is this player so a
Firstly, it was neither a drastic nor nasty foul, but a movement born of frustration; it didn't even harm him.
However, physical attacks are not acceptable; we can neither entertain nor accept them.
The third sentence needs me to know exactly what you mean - it isn't great English and I'm unsure as to exactly what you are trying to say. Is this player so a
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Thank you for your kind help.
Shall I write the third sentence as follows.
Since he is so arrogant and indiscipline in the practice section. We were supposed to remove him from our squad earlier.
Shall I write the third sentence as follows.
Since he is so arrogant and indiscipline in the practice section. We were supposed to remove him from our squad earlier.
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Since he was so arrogant and indisciplined in the practice section, we should have remmoved him from our squad earlier.
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