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Sunitha babu Posted 9 years ago

Kindly fix my poem is it ok ?

locked my heart in a cage ..

cut it down the sides neatly .

i know , no wings for my heart

but , its trying to fly towards you ...

my blood drops are very busy ..

to create a new design in your dress...

just turn your eyes to me...

its paining ..

i wish you couldn't recognize whom am I

LIKE A DEEP OCEAN, HEIGHT OF SKY ...

I DON'T KNOW HOW TO MEASURE


I LOVED YOU SO MUCH

  

Top answer

Lock my heart in a cage; cut down its sides neatly. My heart has no wings, but it's trying to fly to you. Drops of my blood are very busy creating a new design for your dress.

  • Lock my heart in a cage; cut down its sides neatly.
  • My heart has no wings, but it's trying to fly to you.
  • Drops of my blood are very busy creating a new design for your dress.
  • Just turn your eyes toward me— it's aching.
  • I wish you could recognize who I am.
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Lock my heart in a cage;

cut down its sides neatly.

My heart has no wings,

but it's trying to fly to you.

Drops of my blood are very busy

creating a new design for your dress.

Just turn your eyes toward me—

it's aching.

I wish you could recognize who I am.

Like the deep ocean

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